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大学英语四六级写作——如何写出具有句法复杂度的句子

发布日期:2023-04-18   来源:   点击量:

写作是综合考查考生英语能力的有效手段大学英语四六级考试大纲要求考生根据规定的题目和所提供的提纲情景图片或者图表等,在30分钟内写出一篇(四级)120-180、(六级)150-200词的短文。英语写作是展现个人思维层面的技能,也是衡量大学生英语综合水平和应用能力的一个重要指标。写作内容需要通过语言来表达,如何在30分钟内写出具有较高语言质量的作文很重要。以下将介绍如何在短暂的时间内写出具有句法复杂度的句子。

1. 写并列句或者并列成分。例如

[1] Many studies claim that computers distract people, make them lazy thinkers and even lower their work efficiency.

[2] We get connected with each other via internet, shop online with mobile phone and enjoy self-service on machines in banks and restaurants.

[3] They are addicted to the virtual world and even forget to eat, work and communicate with family members or friends.

并列句或者并列成分可以很容易增加所写句子的长度如以上例句中使用动词短语或者非谓语动词短语并列,增加句子长度同时,丰富了语义表达。

2. 对名词进行修饰(加定语)

[1] I would like to recommend a place which is quite popular with visitors from China and other nations.

[2] The Chinese corner located in our school library is a good choice.

[3] I want to offer help to a drop-out girl coming from poverty-striking area in southwest China.

[4] The translation given by many translation apps is full of grammatical errors, which is bound to seriously, mislead people’s learning and communication.

[5] The top challenge is the culture shock, which means you cannot adapt to the exotic life during the first few days or even months.

以上例句中使用前置定语或者后置定语增加了句子的长度和复杂度使句子表意更清楚更加具有表现力例句4】【5】中使用which 将前句和后句进行连接,在句间建立因果逻辑关系,表意更具逻辑性和深度。

3. 对名词进行修饰(加同位语)

[1] Bob, a foreign exchange student, really expects to settle down in Xi’an and seek for a decent job concerning software design.

[2] Hard-working, a Chinese conventional virtue, plays a crucial role in the general routine of everyday living.

[3] Beijing, as the capital of several dynasties, has a profound cultural background, so you can better experience the extensive and profound traditional Chinese culture in Beijing.

[4] Reading books such as Gone with the wind, little prince and A nightingale and a rose can broaden horizon of youngsters.

[5] Social networking applications such as QQ and WeChat emerge one after another and they have become an indispensable part of our lives apparently.

同位语对前的名词进行进一步解释和举例说明,增加句子长度的同时,使句子形式上错落有致,表意更丰富,更具画面感。

4. 对动词或者句子进行修饰(加状语)

英语中状语类型有地点状语时间状语原因状语结果状语目的状语条件状语让步状语方式状语比较状语等

Keeping pets can cultivate the love heart of children. 为例,请观察下列状语从句:

[1] Keeping pets can cultivate the love heart of children although they sometimes bring much trouble to their owners.

[2] Keeping pets can cultivate the love heart of children because taking care of those little animals needs patience and care.

[3] Keeping pets can cultivate the love heart of children when there is only a child in one family.

[4] Keeping pets can cultivate the love heart of children by taking a shower for the animals or talking with these little animals.

以上句子中在主句基础上加上状语增加了句子的长度丰富了句意表达。

5. 如果主句和其他句子之间构成因果关系,则可非谓语动词

写成“主句 + V-ing短语作结果状语”的形式,如以下例句

[1] Indulging in using computers will deprive us of time with people we care about, leading to a lack of real-time interpersonal communication.

[2] Many video games are full of violence to boost players’ excitement, thus enhancing their appeal.

[3] Most joint ventures have some technologies and managerial ideas from other countries, which are relatively different from that in China, bringing feelings of freshness to a graduate like me.

[4] New applications on transportation emerge abundantly, contributing to the fact that people’s lifestyle has been changed as well.

写作中非谓语动词短语的使用可以增加句子的层次感和句法复杂度